ذَٰلِكَ بِأَنَّهُمُ ٱتَّبَعُوا۟ مَآ أَسْخَطَ ٱللَّهَ وَكَرِهُوا۟ رِضْوَٰنَهُۥ فَأَحْبَطَ أَعْمَٰلَهُمْ
"That is because they followed what angers God and disliked His good pleasure; so He voided their deeds."
And this is the densest use of the pattern: in a single sentence there are two grounds (they followed + they disliked) and one result (aḥbaṭa).
And the finding I recorded at verse 14 is completed here: the sūra describes the human being as a creature that sets off after something. In all five occurrences the same form (Form VIII), and each time a different object:
| Verse | Object |
|---|---|
| 3 | al-bāṭil — falsehood |
| 3 | al-ḥaqq min rabbihim — the truth from their Lord |
| 14 | ahwāʾahum — their desires |
| 16 | ahwāʾahum — their desires |
| 28 | mā askhaṭa'llāh — what angers God |
Root: س-خ-ط. Its meaning: to be angry, to be displeased. And the lexicographers describe it in opposition to رِضَا (riḍā).
And the word is in the same semantic field as ghaḍab (غضب), but the lexicographers record a distinction: sakhaṭ is the opposite of good pleasure and its aspect of displeasure weighs more heavily; ghaḍab is anger itself.
And the word order of the verse bears this out: in the second half of the sentence its exact opposite comes — رِضْوَٰنَهُۥ.
رِضْوَان — root ر-ض-و/ر-ض-ي: to be well pleased, to be content. رِضْوَان, on the fiʿlān pattern: a great and complete good pleasure.
The word is used in the Qurʾān for God's good pleasure and occurred at 57/20 in al-Ḥadīd (wa maghfiratun mina'llāhi wa riḍwān).
In the classical commentaries the explanation is given thus: what is meant is not disliking good pleasure itself but disliking what leads to it. The governed term has been elided: karihū mā yūjibu riḍwānahu — "they disliked what would earn His good pleasure".
But the wording of the verse has chosen to avoid this ellipsis and this has an effect — it is my own reading:
The sentence looks not at the result of the choice but at its destination. What a person dislikes may be a command, an obligation or a hardship; but the place that thing goes to is good pleasure. The verse names the act of disliking by the place it arrives at.
And the setting of sakhaṭ and riḍwān against one another in the same sentence is the most striking feature of the word order:
| Verb | Object | |
|---|---|---|
| First | ٱتَّبَعُوا۟ — they followed | مَآ أَسْخَطَ ٱللَّهَ — what angers |
| Second | كَرِهُوا۟ — they disliked | رِضْوَٰنَهُۥ — His good pleasure |
Both verbs announce a turning, and the two objects are each other's opposite. That is, the sentence encloses the choice from both directions at once: they went to one, they fled from the other.
| Verse | Ground |
|---|---|
| 9 | karihū mā anzala'llāh — they disliked what He sent down |
| 28 | ittabaʿū mā askhaṭa'llāh wa karihū riḍwānahu — they followed what angers Him and disliked His good pleasure |
In the ninth verse there was one verb; in the twenty-eighth there are two. And the result is the same.